帮我看看我的英语作文有没有语法错误Everyone has their favorite stars.My favorite star is Zhou Jielun,because he sings songs very well.He is a good singer.I like he sings songs.he is famous for he is very working-hard.His life is very
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帮我看看我的英语作文有没有语法错误Everyone has their favorite stars.My favorite star is Zhou Jielun,because he sings songs very well.He is a good singer.I like he sings songs.he is famous for he is very working-hard.His life is very
帮我看看我的英语作文有没有语法错误
Everyone has their favorite stars.My favorite star is Zhou Jielun,because he sings songs very well.
He is a good singer.I like he sings songs.he is famous for he is very working-hard.His life is very hard when he young .He uesd to be The people who work for others.Then there is a person to help him out of the first record.
Can you tell me your favorite star.
帮我看看我的英语作文有没有语法错误Everyone has their favorite stars.My favorite star is Zhou Jielun,because he sings songs very well.He is a good singer.I like he sings songs.he is famous for he is very working-hard.His life is very
1,I like he sings songs.错误,I like listening to his songs.2,working-hard 改成hard-working 3,when he was young(少了一个was) 4,He used to be...others改成He used to help others.5最后一句是问号.纯手打,