Next month will be the last month of my first semester.求检查语法错误I will have my final exam in this month.These day I will going to prepare for it.These day I really want to eat Xiang He Meatloaf.I decided to cook in with my friend Dean in

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Nextmonthwillbethelastmonthofmyfirstsemester.求检查语法错误Iwillhavemyfinalexaminthismonth.ThesedayIwillgoi

Next month will be the last month of my first semester.求检查语法错误I will have my final exam in this month.These day I will going to prepare for it.These day I really want to eat Xiang He Meatloaf.I decided to cook in with my friend Dean in
Next month will be the last month of my first semester.求检查语法错误
I will have my final exam in this month.These day I will going to prepare for it.
These day I really want to eat Xiang He Meatloaf.I decided to cook in with my friend Dean in his house.Hope I will cook it successfully.

Next month will be the last month of my first semester.求检查语法错误I will have my final exam in this month.These day I will going to prepare for it.These day I really want to eat Xiang He Meatloaf.I decided to cook in with my friend Dean in
in this month, 改成 this month 习惯用法 these day 改成 these days 因为是复数 I will going to 谓语动词大错 I am going to to cook in with 应是 cook with I will have my final exam this month. These days I am going to prepare it and thease days I really want to eat Xiang He Meatloaf. I decide to cook with my friend Dean in his house. Hope I will secceding in cooking it


七处错误。

1、this month 就表示这个月,前面不用介词in

2、These 后肯定是复数 days

 3、将来时态重复,把will改成am

4、同上用复数

5、语境没有过去时态,decide

6、后面已经有介词in

7、缺主语I

  •  day(s)都是偶

  •  These day I will going to prepare for it. 把will改为have been

  •  I decided to cook in with my friend Dean 删去in,decide 用一般现在时

  •  Hope I will cook it successfully最好变为I hope i can cook it successfully

差不多了,希望是可以的,修正一下

应该是these days I will go prepare for it. 因为已经有一个将来时了。不能有2个将来时。 I decided to cook with my friend 没有in。I hope I will success 好了。哈哈。加油啊