急...赶着交作文,帮我检查以下英语作文有无语法错误 Shanghai,located in the East China Sea coast,Haikou Department of Yangtze River is China's largest city.Where is a dynamic growing prosperity of the city.Today's Shanghai is a ver

急...赶着交作文,帮我检查以下英语作文有无语法错误 Shanghai,located in the East China Sea coast,Haikou Department of Yangtze River is China's largest city.Where is a dynamic growing prosperity of the city.Today's Shanghai is a ver
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Shanghai,located in the East China Sea coast,Haikou Department of Yangtze River is China's largest city.Where is a dynamic growing prosperity of the city.
Today's Shanghai is a very modern and sophisticated dignity of traditional cultural city.There are many tall buildings in Shanghai and the air in Shanghai is fresh and there are many green trees and flowers,birds are singing everywhere.Many people come from different places and countries are doing business here.Shanghai is a ancient city besides where is a big international city.For example Temples,Historical Buildings.In the Shanghai had some traditional streets.When you walked in the streets,you will felt Shanghai people are very nice and you may know Chinese history and culture.The souvenirs are bought in the old - fashioned shops.
Shanghai is a mysterious city.I was lured by Chiese history and culture.i would really like to visit it.

急...赶着交作文,帮我检查以下英语作文有无语法错误 Shanghai,located in the East China Sea coast,Haikou Department of Yangtze River is China's largest city.Where is a dynamic growing prosperity of the city.Today's Shanghai is a ver
1.There are many tall buildings in Shanghai and the air in Shanghai is fresh and there are many green trees and flowers,birds are singing everywhere.这儿有问题,这不是个整句,birds are singing everywhere使其不成一句话,因为前面从语法上看已经是完整一句话,我建议可以删去.
2.Shanghai is a ancient city besides where is a big international city.应该是 an ancient city .
3.Temples要小写,In the Shanghai 改为Shanghai you will felt 改为you will feel
4.Shanghai is a ancient city besides where is a big international city.For example Temples,Historical Buildings上海是一个古老的城市之外,是一个庞大的国际城市.例如寺庙、历史建筑.翻译了一下你觉得通吗?后面举例应该是 国际城市.
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问题补充：灌水，不懂英语的就别来了，精通英语的帮我改下吧！谢谢了！ .A survey shows that about 20% of the students have a bad habit of

Shanghai, located in the East China Sea coast, Haikou Department of Yangtze River is China's largest city，where is a dynamic growing prosperity of the city.

Today's Shanghai is a very moder...

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Shanghai, located in the East China Sea coast, Haikou Department of Yangtze River is China's largest city，where is a dynamic growing prosperity of the city.

Today's Shanghai is a very modern and sophisticated dignity of traditional cultural city.There are many tall buildings in Shanghai and the air in Shanghai is fresh and there are many green trees and flowers.
Birds are singing everywhere.Many people come from different places and countries doing business here.Shanghai is an ancient city besides where is a big international city,for example Temples, Historical Buildings. Shanghai had some traditional streets. When you walk in the streets, you will feel people there are very nice and you may know Chinese history and culture.The souvenirs are bought in the old - fashioned shops.

Shanghai is a mysterious city. I am lured by Chiese history and culture. I would really like to visit it.

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