求学霸纠正语法错误和病句!I have a dream that one day the sky is blue,the air is fresh,green trees everywhere.Recently,many city of the sky is always gray,cigarette butts and plastic bags everywhere on the ground,also mingled with the dust

求学霸纠正语法错误和病句!I have a dream that one day the sky is blue,the air is fresh,green trees everywhere.Recently,many city of the sky is always gray,cigarette butts and plastic bags everywhere on the ground,also mingled with the dust
求学霸纠正语法错误和病句!
I have a dream that one day the sky is blue,the air is fresh,green trees everywhere.Recently,many city of the sky is always gray,cigarette butts and plastic bags everywhere on the ground,also mingled with the dust in the air.People living on this earth for many centuries,nature environment is destroyed,for protection from heat strength than a fast destruction of nature.The more advanced the science and technology,the more serious pollution.Although there are a lot of people in the society calls for us to protect the environment,but people's greed led to a series of pollution.I feel very sad.Recent haze phenomena,for example,is the reason why because of improper pollution emissions.Environmental pollution not only destroyed the ecological balance,also affects the people to their health.Almost making endless!As we of the interwar independence generation,more should know the importance of protecting our natural,effort to stop the harm caused by the nature.You know,there is only one earth,it is our common home.Let us join hands to build better homes!I believe that the dream will come true!

求学霸纠正语法错误和病句!I have a dream that one day the sky is blue,the air is fresh,green trees everywhere.Recently,many city of the sky is always gray,cigarette butts and plastic bags everywhere on the ground,also mingled with the dust
I have a dream that one day the sky would be blue,the air would be fresh,and there would be green trees everywhere.Recently,the sky over many cities have always been gray,cigarette butts and plastic bags have been found everywhere on the ground,coupled with the dust in the air.Humans have been living on this earth for many centuries,but now with the natural environment being gradually destroyed,(for protection from heat strength than a fast destruction of nature.不知道你想说什么,有中文吗?) The more advanced is the science and technology,the more serious is the pollution.Although there are a lot of people in the society call for the protection of the environment,people's greed or the urge to make more money has led to a serious pollution problem.For example,the recent haze phenomena is the result of improper emissions pollutants.Environmental pollution has not only destroyed the ecological balance,but also affected people' health.As we are the interwar-independent generation,we should know better the importance of protecting our natural environment,devote more efforts to stop the harm of pollution to our natural environment.As we all know,there is only one earth,it is our common home.Let us join hands to build better homes!I believe that my dream would,one day,come true!
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