帮忙修改一下这段话(英文)Do you want to be more handsome?Do you want to be more charming?If you want,yoga is a good choice.No matter you are an American,a Chinese,an old man,a young man,a boy or a girl,you all can practice Yoga.Now,yoga is

帮忙修改一下这段话(英文)Do you want to be more handsome?Do you want to be more charming?If you want,yoga is a good choice.No matter you are an American,a Chinese,an old man,a young man,a boy or a girl,you all can practice Yoga.Now,yoga is
帮忙修改一下这段话(英文)
Do you want to be more handsome?Do you want to be more charming?If you want,yoga is a good choice.No matter you are an American,a Chinese,an old man,a young man,a boy or a girl,you all can practice Yoga.
Now,yoga is one of the most popular sports all over the world.But do you know yoga originally came from India?It has come from India since five thousand years ago.
But yoga we practice today is unlike the time of that.
The yoga philosophy lets the people understand the life true meaning,lets the people learn how to live.Yoga philosophy is a very deep knowledge.
There are a lot of stars and big potatoes are willing to practice yoga.They think yoga can make people healthy,attractive and joyful.
And I think yoga is a good way to lose weight,especially for girls.But if it's your first time to practice yoga,you should be very careful.If you are careless,you may get hurt.As you know,a good thing could turn into a bad one.

帮忙修改一下这段话(英文)Do you want to be more handsome?Do you want to be more charming?If you want,yoga is a good choice.No matter you are an American,a Chinese,an old man,a young man,a boy or a girl,you all can practice Yoga.Now,yoga is
Do you want to be more handsome?
Do you want to be more charming?
If the answear is YES, yoga is your best choice. Whether you are American or Chinese, male or female, old or young, you can practice Yoga soever!
Now, yoga is one of the most popular sports all over the world.
But do you know that yoga originated from India and has been spead for more than five thousand years!
Yoga we practice today is unlike that of the ancient times.
The yoga philosophy lets people understand the true meaning of life and learn how to keep peace inside.
Yoga philosophy comprises of the profound knowledge!
A lot of superstars and big pots are willing to practice yoga.
They believe that yoga makes them healthy, attractive and delighted.
I think yoga is a optimal solution to weight reducing, especially for girls.
For the first time of practice, you should be very careful, otherwise you may get hurt.
As you know, any good thing could turn into a bad one.
注意,连词、用词、句式要多变,there be这样的简单句型尽量转化成其他表达法或省略,力求简洁多变不重复；a good choice, one of the most popular..., a good way to...是中文的习惯,英语的习惯是你觉得好的就是最好的.

1.No matter if you are...
2.It came from India five thousand years ago.
3.But the yoga we practice today is unlike the yoga of that time.
4.The yoga philosophy lets people understand life's true meaning...