英语改错,共十个i had a good friend who's name is liu wei.shi is our monitou but one of the excellent students in our class.she is clever,and she works very hardly.we have a lot on common and have a lot of to talk about.one evening she told me

英语改错,共十个i had a good friend who's name is liu wei.shi is our monitou but one of the excellent students in our class.she is clever,and she works very hardly.we have a lot on common and have a lot of to talk about.one evening she told me
英语改错,共十个
i had a good friend who's name is liu wei.shi is our monitou but one of the excellent students in our class.she is clever,and she works very hardly.we have a lot on common and have a lot of to talk about.one evening she told me that something happened when her parents was doing her homeworks on sunday morning when she smelt something burning.she stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbour's house.she called 119 immediate.ten miuntes later,the firemen came and put our fire.her neighbour was very thankful for her help.

英语改错,共十个i had a good friend who's name is liu wei.shi is our monitou but one of the excellent students in our class.she is clever,and she works very hardly.we have a lot on common and have a lot of to talk about.one evening she told me
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i HAVE a good friend WHOSE name is liu wei.shi is our monitou AND one of the excellent students in our class.she is clever,and she works very HARD .we have a lot IN common and have a lot of( 去掉of） to talk about.one evening she told me that something happened when her parents was doing THEIR HOUSEWORK on sunday morning when she smelt something burning.she stopped 加TO look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbour's house.she called 119 immediateLY .ten miuntes later,the firemen came and put our fire.her neighbour was very thankful for her help.

I (have) a good friend (whose) name is liu wei. she is our monitor (and) one of the excellent students in our class.she is clever,and she works very (hard).we have a lot of（in)
common and have a ...

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I (have) a good friend (whose) name is liu wei. she is our monitor (and) one of the excellent students in our class.she is clever,and she works very (hard).we have a lot of（in)
common and have a lot (of去掉) to talk about.one evening she told me that something happened when her parents （were） doing her homeworks on sunday morning when she smelt something burnning.she stopped (to look) out of the window and (found) a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbour's house.she called 119 (immediately). ten miuntes later,the firemen came and put our fire. her neighbour was very thankful for her help.

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had have
who's whose
but and
hardly hard
on in
a lot of 把of去掉
her homework their homework
stopped look out在look前面加上to
find found
immidiate immidiately

1.who's 改为 whoes
2.but改为 and
3.hardly hard
4.on common 改为 in common
5.a lot of 后面加things
6.her parents 改为she
7.on sunday morning when 的 when去掉
8.stopped后加 to
9.immediate immediately
10put out +(the) fire
10.