英语天才请进,我要写一篇英语作文,帮我看一下哪里要修改作文：根据下列材料写一篇报道时间：2009年10月的一天傍晚地点：MrsBessClarke家的附近湖事情；MrsBessClarke晚饭过后就到家的附近的湖
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英语天才请进,我要写一篇英语作文,帮我看一下哪里要修改作文：根据下列材料写一篇报道时间：2009年10月的一天傍晚地点：MrsBessClarke家的附近湖事情；MrsBessClarke晚饭过后就到家的附近的湖
英语天才请进,我要写一篇英语作文,帮我看一下哪里要修改
作文：根据下列材料写一篇报道
时间：2009年10月的一天傍晚
地点：MrsBessClarke家的附近湖
事情；MrsBessClarke晚饭过后就到家的附近的湖散步,看到湖里有一只怪物：它是黑色的,长着三角形的脑袋,圆圆的眼睛,长长的尾巴,它的脖子长约10厘米,它的牙齿很锋利
MrsBessClarke的感受：
以下是我自己写的：
Goodnight everyone .This is th news TV .There has a news about MrsBessClarke ,In 2009 October one night day ,After ,MrsBessClarke has supper ,he went for a walk near the lake ,Suddley ,he saw the ``in the lake ,The ``` body was black And it has a ```,a round eyes ,a long tail ,its fect was 10meters long ,And its teeth was very ``he said .
In the end ,MrsBessClarkefeel he aford of it and he did't belive his eyes
英语天才请进,我要写一篇英语作文,帮我看一下哪里要修改作文：根据下列材料写一篇报道时间：2009年10月的一天傍晚地点：MrsBessClarke家的附近湖事情；MrsBessClarke晚饭过后就到家的附近的湖
This is th news TV 改为This is the news TV .
There has a news about MrsBessClarke 改为There is a news about MrsBessClarke
after后加that
很好
很好
Good night everyone, this is News TV. There is a news about Mrs. Bess Clarke on an October night in 2009. After Mrs. Bess Clarke had supper, she went for a walk near the lake. Suddenly, she saw a mons...
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Good night everyone, this is News TV. There is a news about Mrs. Bess Clarke on an October night in 2009. After Mrs. Bess Clarke had supper, she went for a walk near the lake. Suddenly, she saw a monster in the lake. "Its body was black and it had a triangluar head,a round eyes and a long tail. Its nech was 10 centimeters long and its teeth was very sharp," she said. At the end, Mrs. Bess Clarke was afraid of it and she could not belive her eyes.
额, 实话实说的话有不少拼写, 格式,语发错误, 我把它们都改过来了, 可以放心. 至于文采什么的我不知道你的水平, 我觉得那方面还不错啦, 题目要求的都很清楚地写出来了. 望采用~~~=)
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