修改一篇英文演讲稿下周一,英语演讲比赛决赛就要开始了.主题是关于家乡的.可我现在还没有头绪,大叔,大妈,靓哥,靓妺,爷爷,奶奶们帮帮忙哈.Dream—all my life timeLadies and gentlemen,boys and girls,Goo

修改一篇英文演讲稿下周一,英语演讲比赛决赛就要开始了.主题是关于家乡的.可我现在还没有头绪,大叔,大妈,靓哥,靓妺,爷爷,奶奶们帮帮忙哈.Dream—all my life timeLadies and gentlemen,boys and girls,Goo
修改一篇英文演讲稿
下周一,英语演讲比赛决赛就要开始了.主题是关于家乡的.可我现在还没有头绪,大叔,大妈,靓哥,靓妺,爷爷,奶奶们帮帮忙哈.
Dream—all my life time
Ladies and gentlemen,boys and girls,
Good afternoon!Before I speak,may I ask a question?Do you have dream Maybe you have the different dreams; maybe some never have dreams.But I believe you may have the same dreams after I make the short speech.So my topic today is “Dream —all my life time ”.
Today,I stand here.I feel exciting and proud very much.First please allow me to introduce myself.I’m yanglei and I’m from a small countryside.So I know farmers are still living用进行时会更好 a simple life.
In our college many students who come from countryside have the dream.It is that they hope they can live a richer life in city数 But they may forget where they come from.Although country life is simple and poor,I will still come back my hometown after graduation.This is my dream from my heart .I hope I can improve my hometown.
As a Computer Science Department student in our college,I’m very proud of our college and our students.I’ll do my best to acquire knowledge .In future,I will devote all my life for my hometown.
Where there’s a will,there’s a way.I believe my hometown will get more beautiful and richer.Because my point of departure is to serve my hometown whole heartedly.I’m from countryside .I have inherited unyielding and unconquerable from farms; I have inherited kind and heartedly like fire .Let’s look forward to the dawn of better days .
These words are “My dream”.At last,thank you give me this chance for expressing my idea.That’s all,thank you very much.

修改一篇英文演讲稿下周一,英语演讲比赛决赛就要开始了.主题是关于家乡的.可我现在还没有头绪,大叔,大妈,靓哥,靓妺,爷爷,奶奶们帮帮忙哈.Dream—all my life timeLadies and gentlemen,boys and girls,Goo
我帮你做了些改动,不知你喜欢吗?另外,我在结尾说"god bless you."可不可以?在美国那是很典型的结束语.你自己看着办吧.祝你演讲成功!
Ladies and gentlemen,boys and girls,
Good afternoon!Before I speak,may I ask you a question?Did you ever have any dreams Maybe some of you had good dreams or maybe some of you had bad dreams.Or maybe some never have any dreams.I am pretty sure that you will have the same dream after I finish my short speech.My topic today is “ my life time dream”.
Today,I stand here.I feel very excited and proud .First,please allow me to introduce myself.I’m yanglei and I’m from a small countryside.As we all know that life in the countryside is not easy.
In my college most of my classmates who come from the countryside share the same dream:they wish they could live a better life in the city数.I could understand their feelings.It is true that life in the countryside is hard and poor.But what if everybody chooses to live in the city,who is going to help those poor farmers?Who is going to bring changes to the place that has nourishes us,a place that I have great feelings I can't join my classmates.I have made up my mind to go back to my hometown after graduation.When I was little I had dreamed of making my hometown a better place.
Now a student majored in Computer Science ,I’ll try my best to acquire knowledge .In the future,I will devote all my life for my hometown.
Where there’s a will,there’s a way.I believe great changes will take place in my hometown.It will become more beautiful.People there will live a better life.I’m a boy from the countryside .I know I have inherited unyielding and unconquerable from farms; I have inherited kind and heartedly like fire .Let’s look forward to the dawn of better days .
So now you all know what “My dream” is.It is a beautiful dream and it will become true.
Thank you for giving me this chance to reveal my beautiful dream.I wish all your beautiful dreams come true,too.Good luck and god bless you.

修改的真好，高手！！佩服，佩服！！