初一英语作文,大家帮我改改,Hello!Everyone.Today is Monday.In the early morning.I am sleeping now.The weather is windy in the early morning.In the morning.I am get up.The weather is sunny in the morning.I usually read a book in the morning
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初一英语作文,大家帮我改改,Hello!Everyone.Today is Monday.In the early morning.I am sleeping now.The weather is windy in the early morning.In the morning.I am get up.The weather is sunny in the morning.I usually read a book in the morning
初一英语作文,大家帮我改改,
Hello!Everyone.Today is Monday.In the early morning.I am sleeping now.The weather is windy in the early morning.In the morning.I am get up.The weather is sunny in the morning.I usually read a book in the morning .In the afternoon.I am go to school.The weather is cloudy .I think it is going to rain.In the evening.Really rainy!I don’t have an umbrella.I am sad.Because I don’t like rainy.
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初一英语作文,大家帮我改改,Hello!Everyone.Today is Monday.In the early morning.I am sleeping now.The weather is windy in the early morning.In the morning.I am get up.The weather is sunny in the morning.I usually read a book in the morning
Hello!Everyone.
Today is Monday and it was windy in the early morning.
I was still sleeping .
Later,I got up.The weather became sunny .
I usually read a book in the morning .
Afternoon.I got to school.The weather became cloudy .I thought it was going to rain.
In the evening.Really it's rainy!
I didn’t have an umbrella with me.I was unhappy because I don't like rainy.
（首先,这篇的时态很混乱,这是一个记叙文,所以主要要用过去式,另外你在记述的时候最好不要提到你平时在做什么.还有一般我们说天风大是用 it 指代天气,不需要说 the weather.
你是写的周一做的事,你中间提到“你经常在早上读书”,这样你自己也会不清晰,不明白自己到底要写什么时态.
比较明显的错误我帮你纠正了,没法帮你改太多,你还是自己多多学习吧.）
I am getting up. I am going to school.