懂英语的请进帮忙改错Hi TimThe Rockers will be visiting all parts of the country. next week, He will be arriving our town.Are you free next week? I want to visit you to come here and watch performance with me.The Rockers will be staying for

懂英语的请进帮忙改错Hi TimThe Rockers will be visiting all parts of the country. next week, He will be arriving our town.Are you free next week? I want to visit you to come here and watch performance with me.The Rockers will be staying for
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Hi Tim
The Rockers will be visiting all parts of the country. next week, He will be arriving our town.
Are you free next week? I want to visit you to come here and watch performance with me.
The Rockers will be staying for three days. He will be giving five performance. I really hope you can come!
Look forward to hearing from you soon!

懂英语的请进帮忙改错Hi TimThe Rockers will be visiting all parts of the country. next week, He will be arriving our town.Are you free next week? I want to visit you to come here and watch performance with me.The Rockers will be staying for
Hi Tim
The Rockers will visit（will后加动词原形）all parts of the country next week,He will arrive at our town.
Are you free next week?I want you come here and watch performance with me.
The Rockers will stay for three days.He will givefive performances.I really hope you can come!
Looking forward to hear from you soon!
Yours,
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Hi Tim
The Rockers will visit all parts of the country .Next week, he will arrive in our town.
and will stay here for three days. He will give five performances.
Are you free ne...

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Hi Tim
The Rockers will visit all parts of the country .Next week, he will arrive in our town.
and will stay here for three days. He will give five performances.
Are you free next week? I want to invite you to come here and watch performance with me.
I really hope you could come!
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!

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Hi Tim
The Rockers will be visiting all parts of the country. next week, He will be arriving AT our town.
Are you free next week? I want to INVITE you to come here and watch THE performance wi...

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Hi Tim
The Rockers will be visiting all parts of the country. next week, He will be arriving AT our town.
Are you free next week? I want to INVITE you to come here and watch THE performance with me.
The Rockers will be staying for three days. He will be giving five performanceS. I really hope you can come!
Look forward to hearing from you soon!

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