谁能帮我写一篇英语作文My last holiday 写了都给分,写得好再加分

谁能帮我写一篇英语作文My last holiday 写了都给分,写得好再加分
谁能帮我写一篇英语作文My last holiday 写了都给分,写得好再加分

谁能帮我写一篇英语作文My last holiday 写了都给分,写得好再加分
My Last Holiday
Last sunday,l and my family went to a park to spend out holiday.In the park,there are so many trees,they didn't have any leaves,but they still look so beautiful.we took a lot of pictrues and we had fun.i really enjoy the holiday and i hope i will have more chance to relax myself with my parents.

请问你自己为什么不写呢？是想将练习写作的机会留给别人？还是想投机取巧的占别人的便宜？
无论如何这都是一次自己亲身体验的机会，放弃了留给了别人或者自己抄袭了，暂时得到了一时的利益，而最终倒霉的还是你自己，因为你失去了自己练习写作的机会，失去了战胜自我的的机会，使你越来越没有写作的信心，越来越觉得抄袭抄的很容易，而你能这样抄袭一辈子吗？将来你要应对的诸如高考，四六级考试，专业等级考试，公务员考...

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请问你自己为什么不写呢？是想将练习写作的机会留给别人？还是想投机取巧的占别人的便宜？
无论如何这都是一次自己亲身体验的机会，放弃了留给了别人或者自己抄袭了，暂时得到了一时的利益，而最终倒霉的还是你自己，因为你失去了自己练习写作的机会，失去了战胜自我的的机会，使你越来越没有写作的信心，越来越觉得抄袭抄的很容易，而你能这样抄袭一辈子吗？将来你要应对的诸如高考，四六级考试，专业等级考试，公务员考试或其他等等有可能决定终生的考试，你都能以抄袭为其通过的捷径吗？

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Last sunday, my family went to a park to spend out holiday.In the park, there are so many trees, they didn't have any leaves, but they still look so beautiful. we took a lot of pictrues and we had fun...

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Last sunday, my family went to a park to spend out holiday.In the park, there are so many trees, they didn't have any leaves, but they still look so beautiful. we took a lot of pictrues and we had fun.i really enjoy the holiday and i hope i will have more chance to relax myself with my parents.
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This summer holiday will be my last summer holiday of my primary school.I am going to the middle school to start my new life. In this summer ,I am going to learn many things to adapted to my new challenge in the coming middle school study,for example to study the knowledge to keep up with my classmate.And I will help my parents do some housework to let them feel that i have grown up.That is my plan ,it is simple ,but I will do these things to spend my last holiday !

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用中文写可以么?