大家帮我看看这篇英语有语法错么?My holiday My holiday is a little boring.In July I went to school to learn a lot of boring things for about 2 weeks.Maybe it can help me a lot.But I still think it was boring.After school’s lessons,I jo

大家帮我看看这篇英语有语法错么?My holiday My holiday is a little boring.In July I went to school to learn a lot of boring things for about 2 weeks.Maybe it can help me a lot.But I still think it was boring.After school’s lessons,I jo
大家帮我看看这篇英语有语法错么?
My holiday
My holiday is a little boring.In July I went to school to learn a lot of boring things for about 2 weeks.Maybe it can help me a lot.But I still think it was boring.After school’s lessons,I joined in a basketball camp.It was very interesting.But it made me felt tried.In August I began to learn Physics.It is important.During august I also played basketball every day with Haoxiang if the weather is not very bad.This is my summer holiday.I think I will be better in the new school term.

大家帮我看看这篇英语有语法错么?My holiday My holiday is a little boring.In July I went to school to learn a lot of boring things for about 2 weeks.Maybe it can help me a lot.But I still think it was boring.After school’s lessons,I jo
My holiday was a little boring.In July I went to school to learn a lot of boring things for about 2 weeks.Maybe it could help me a lot.But I still think it was boring.After school’s lessons,I joined in a basketball camp.It was very interesting.But it made me fell tried.In August I began to learn Physics.It is important.During August I also played basketball every day with Haoxiang when the weather was not very bad.This was my summer holiday.I think I will be better in study in the new school term.
总的来说语法错还是少数,但是有些语意不是很合逻辑.你对照自己的文章看看,错的我都改过来的.还有最有一句是说,我在新的一学期中学习会更好,不能这么表达的,你这样写实说我在新的一学期身体会更好.所以我就改成学习会更好比较和逻辑了.

第一句把to 改为 and learned 会更好，意思更通顺。
第三行felt改为feel，因为make后接原形动词。
第四行is改为was较好。时态比较一致。during改为In更好。
第五行，第一个is改为was，
第六行be better好像更多指身体的好，最好改为try my best。

My holiday was a little boring. In July I went to school to learn a lot of boring things for about 2 weeks. Maybe it could help me a lot. But I still think it was boring. After school’s lessons, I joi...

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My holiday was a little boring. In July I went to school to learn a lot of boring things for about 2 weeks. Maybe it could help me a lot. But I still think it was boring. After school’s lessons, I joined in a basketball camp. It was very interesting. But it made me fell tried. In August I began to learn Physics. It is important. During August I also played basketball every day with Haoxiang when the weather was not very bad. This was my summer holiday. I think I will be better in study in the new school term.

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