【求英语高手help】英语作文批改,1分钟英语演讲稿,麻烦看下有没有语病,句子能不能更好些,东莞的美好未来Bright Future in Dongguan　广东省的东莞市,迄今为止仍是一个几乎没人知道的城市,但我

【求英语高手help】英语作文批改,1分钟英语演讲稿,麻烦看下有没有语病,句子能不能更好些,东莞的美好未来Bright Future in Dongguan　广东省的东莞市,迄今为止仍是一个几乎没人知道的城市,但我
【求英语高手help】英语作文批改,1分钟英语演讲稿,麻烦看下有没有语病,句子能不能更好些,
东莞的美好未来
Bright Future in Dongguan
　广东省的东莞市,迄今为止仍是一个几乎没人知道的城市,但我相信,东莞会越来越好,越来越国际化.
Dongguan City,Guangdong Province,so far is still a few people know the city,but I believe,Dongguan will become better and better,more and more international.
在未来的某一天,世界上大多数人将不单知道中国的北京,还知道东莞.如果有人问到东莞,我们可以毫不犹豫的说：
One day in the future,the majority of people in the world will not only know China's Beijing,Dongguan also know.If someone asks to Dongguan,we can not hesitate to say:
“那真是个完美的城市!”
"It was a perfect city!"
“那里社会安定,生活放心；那里交通舒畅,人人都遵守交通规则；那里的人性格正直友善,乐于助人；那里的教育事业发达,盛产人才!那里的休闲娱乐设施齐全,为市民提供了放松的空间；那里渔业发达,水产价格划算,且健康美味；那里气候温和湿润,空气质量好,树木林立,鸟语花香!”
"Where the social stability,life assured; where the traffic is good,everyone to follow the traffic rules; where people upright friendliness,helpfulness;where the cause of education developed,rich talent!The leisure and entertainment facilities there is complete,provide a relaxing space for the public; where the fishery is developed,aquatic products price,and healthy and delicious; where the climate is mild and humid,the air quality is good,the trees,birds' twitter and fragrance of flowers!"
我相信这一切应该不远了,东莞的一定会有一个美好的明天,幸福的未来,怒放的春天!
I believe that everything should be close,Dongguan will surely have a better tomorrow,happy future,bloom in spring!速求啊.

【求英语高手help】英语作文批改,1分钟英语演讲稿,麻烦看下有没有语病,句子能不能更好些,东莞的美好未来Bright Future in Dongguan　广东省的东莞市,迄今为止仍是一个几乎没人知道的城市,但我
Bright Future in Dongguan
Dongguan City,in Guangdong Province,so far it is a well-konwn city,but I believe,Dongguan will become better and better,more and more international.
One day in the future,the majority of people in the world will not only know China's Beijing,but also know our city--Dongguan.If someone asks about Dongguan,we can answer without any hesitation:
"It is a perfect city!"
there is no worry about living here; there is good traffic and everyone obeys the taffic rules;there are citizens who are honest,friendly and willing to help.there are many wonderful schools and famous people; there are good entertaining equipment which is offered to citizens to relax themselves; there is a developed fishing industry and the seafood here is cheap and dellicious; there is a mild climate with air of good quality,beautiful flowers and green forests where birds can sing.
I believe that it is not far,Dongguan will surely have a better tomorrow ,a happy future,and a blooming spring!