英语短文改错.（一个字一个字敲上去的,希望亲们能帮个忙~） 【ps：Happy new year!】A sports meeting was held in our school several days before.The last event was the 400-meter relay race,that had promised to be an exciting on

英语短文改错.（一个字一个字敲上去的,希望亲们能帮个忙~） 【ps：Happy new year!】A sports meeting was held in our school several days before.The last event was the 400-meter relay race,that had promised to be an exciting on
英语短文改错.（一个字一个字敲上去的,希望亲们能帮个忙~） 【ps：Happy new year!】
A sports meeting was held in our school several days before.The last event was the 400-meter relay race,that had promised to be an exciting one.And so it was!Teams from every class joined in the race,but the winning team would be the champion of our school!So each player tries to win.The big crowd became quite silently and all of them had their eyes were focused as team took their places.
At the finishing lines,the runners from our classbreasted the tape.Our class took a first place.Everyone cheered wildly and we felt extremely.

英语短文改错.（一个字一个字敲上去的,希望亲们能帮个忙~） 【ps：Happy new year!】A sports meeting was held in our school several days before.The last event was the 400-meter relay race,that had promised to be an exciting on
A sports meeting was held in our school several days (before-->ago).The last event was the 400-meter relay race,(that-->which) had promised to be an exciting one.And so it was!Teams from every class joined (in-->删除） the race,（but-->and) the winning team would be the champion of our school!(So-->As a result,) each player (tries-->tried) to win.The big crowd became quite (silently-->silent) (,) and all of them had their eyes (were-->删除） focused as (team-->teams) took their places.
At the finishing lines,(the runners from our class breasted the tape.Our class took a first place-->our class was the first to cross the line).Everyone cheered wildly and we felt extremely (happy).
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A sports meeting was held in our school several days ago.The last event was the 400-meter relay race,which had promised to be an exciting one.And so it was!Teams from every class joined the race,and the winning team would be the champion of our school!As a result,each player tried to win.The big crowd became quite silent,and all of them had their eyes focused as teams took their places.
At the finishing lines,our class was the first to cross the line.Everyone cheered wildly and we felt extremely happy.

第一行 before---ago
第二行that---which
had promised--had been promised
join in---join
第三行but--and
tries---tried
第四行silently---silent
删除were focused的were
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第一行 before---ago
第二行that---which
had promised--had been promised
join in---join
第三行but--and
tries---tried
第四行silently---silent
删除were focused的were
team---teams
第六行 took a first---took the first
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帮你改一点点 there was a sports meeting in our school several days ago .
剩下的 请lz自己翻翻词典慢慢改。。。

第一行：before-ago, 第二行：that-which, had后面加been, in去掉，第三行：but-and, would be-was, So-Because, tries-tried, 第四行：silently-silent, were去掉，team-teams, 第五行：lines-lines, a-the. 还有我觉得你这个文章没有完吧，最后一句we felt extreme...

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第一行：before-ago, 第二行：that-which, had后面加been, in去掉，第三行：but-and, would be-was, So-Because, tries-tried, 第四行：silently-silent, were去掉，team-teams, 第五行：lines-lines, a-the. 还有我觉得你这个文章没有完吧，最后一句we felt extremely什么呢？我感觉要是短文改错不会出这种类型的缺词。

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