这句话英语语法对吗……When after bleak and lonely years in an Englishpublic school,he retured to India,he suddenly felt a strong desire wo write………………虽然两个逗号之间是插入语,但是插入语里主谓齐全啊,后面

这句话英语语法对吗……When after bleak and lonely years in an Englishpublic school,he retured to India,he suddenly felt a strong desire wo write………………虽然两个逗号之间是插入语,但是插入语里主谓齐全啊,后面
这句话英语语法对吗……
When after bleak and lonely years in an Englishpublic school,he retured to India,he suddenly felt a strong desire wo write………………
虽然两个逗号之间是插入语,但是插入语里主谓齐全啊,后面又是he suddenly…………不串句吗
From about AD 700to 1600,sculptors created nearly 1000 colassal rock statues on the remote and tiny Easter Island
不应该用过去完成式吗，怎么是created
不是有个from么，或者说过去完成进行时

这句话英语语法对吗……When after bleak and lonely years in an Englishpublic school,he retured to India,he suddenly felt a strong desire wo write………………虽然两个逗号之间是插入语,但是插入语里主谓齐全啊,后面
正常语序应该是: he suddenly felt a strong desire wo write when he retured to India after bleak and lonely years in an Englishpublic school.
when引导时间状语从句,after是介词,介词短语作when引导的从句的时间状语.
过去完成时在使用的过程中必须有明显的过去时间作为参照,本句话中只有一个过去时间,所以应该用一般过去时.

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From about AD 700to 1600,sculptors created nearly 1000 colassal rock statues on the remote and tiny Easter Island
不应该用过去完成式吗，怎么是created
不是有个from么，或者说过去完成进行时
I studied in that mi...

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问题补充：
From about AD 700to 1600,sculptors created nearly 1000 colassal rock statues on the remote and tiny Easter Island
不应该用过去完成式吗，怎么是created
不是有个from么，或者说过去完成进行时
I studied in that middle school from 1998 to 2000.
显然过去式,为什么用完成,也没说到现在有什么影响.
问题补充：
From about AD 700to 1600,sculptors created nearly 1000 colassal rock statues on the remote and tiny Easter Island
不应该用过去完成式吗，怎么是created
From about AD 700to 1600
很明显的过去时间状语.这是一个事实,用过去式叙述最好了.
并没有说对后来的影响,为什么用完成??
he retured to India,
he suddenly felt a strong desire wo write,
前面不是插入语,这是两个并列小分句.
是并列句.
动作很连续,不应该改成分词插入语形式.

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第一句话的改动方式和理由
When after bleak and lonely years in an Englishpublic school,(时间状语) he retured to India,and (并列两句主句) he suddenly felt a strong desire wo write………………
第二句
From about AD 700to 16...

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第一句话的改动方式和理由
When after bleak and lonely years in an Englishpublic school,(时间状语) he retured to India,and (并列两句主句) he suddenly felt a strong desire wo write………………
第二句
From about AD 700to 1600,sculptors created nearly 1000 colassal rock statues on the remote and tiny Easter Island
此句话是正确的，必须使用一般过去时
过去完成时(had done)的使用情景是“过去的过去”，即一句话中出现了两个明显的时间先后，那么“先”的那个动词必须使用过去完成时，例如：
He had finished his task before returning home.
千万不要从中文去理解过去完成时，不要单纯地把它翻译成“做了”。过去完成时在英语中的使用是非常少的

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