英语作文 求好心人修改下阿 ..In the October 12 We have annual sports meet .That day the students come early .Wait for the beginning of the sports meeting .different since peacetime of that time .It has the gun salute of bomb or enters the
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英语作文 求好心人修改下阿 ..In the October 12 We have annual sports meet .That day the students come early .Wait for the beginning of the sports meeting .different since peacetime of that time .It has the gun salute of bomb or enters the
英语作文 求好心人修改下阿 ..
In the October 12 We have annual sports meet .That day the students come early .Wait for the beginning of the sports meeting .different since peacetime of that time .It has the gun salute of bomb or enters the type etc item .Match and then begin .Each athlete diligent running .The classmates cheer on applauding for them
That day I was really very happy
英语作文 求好心人修改下阿 ..In the October 12 We have annual sports meet .That day the students come early .Wait for the beginning of the sports meeting .different since peacetime of that time .It has the gun salute of bomb or enters the
On October 12 We held the annual sports meet .Students were supposed to come early that day..We could wait no longer for the sports meet.to start..The sunshine bathed on every inch of our skin.As the gun fired to declare the start of the running match,we were all attracted in the match.And my classmates were cheering for the competitors.
I spent a really happy day that day.
原文意思不清,所以自己推断了下.
我们在10月12日,一年一度的运动会。那一天学生们早点来。等待开始的运动会。因为平时不同。它具有礼炮炸弹或进入类型等项目。比赛,然后就开始。每个运动员勤奋跑步。同学们为他们鼓掌喝彩
那天,我真的很高兴
第二句改一下。额 怎么改阿这个嘛。。。其实啊。。。。我也不知道。。。。。- - 我想知道 我的 时态.. 语法..什么什么的 有没有错误阿 ....
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我们在10月12日,一年一度的运动会。那一天学生们早点来。等待开始的运动会。因为平时不同。它具有礼炮炸弹或进入类型等项目。比赛,然后就开始。每个运动员勤奋跑步。同学们为他们鼓掌喝彩
那天,我真的很高兴
第二句改一下。
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