我写的英文短文中的几句,1.He went to supermaket to buy some foods.2.He was going to have a party on the next day.是改错，自己写的不知有什么问题，我是初二的学生，还有两句：3..they took snake food and drinks with

我写的英文短文中的几句,1.He went to supermaket to buy some foods.2.He was going to have a party on the next day.是改错，自己写的不知有什么问题，我是初二的学生，还有两句：3..they took snake food and drinks with
我写的英文短文中的几句,1.He went to supermaket to buy some foods.
2.He was going to have a party on the next day.
是改错，自己写的不知有什么问题，我是初二的学生，还有两句：3..they took snake food and drinks with them.4.success will come after you work hard.

我写的英文短文中的几句,1.He went to supermaket to buy some foods.2.He was going to have a party on the next day.是改错，自己写的不知有什么问题，我是初二的学生，还有两句：3..they took snake food and drinks with
第一句应该这样改：He went to the supermarket to buy some food.
第二句应该这样改：He was going to have a party the next day.

问题补充：
是改错，自己写的不知有什么问题，我是初二的学生，谢谢你们！还有两句：3..they took snake food and drinks with them.4.success will come after you work hard.
3..they took snake (for) food and drinks with them
But flesh ...

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问题补充：
是改错，自己写的不知有什么问题，我是初二的学生，谢谢你们！还有两句：3..they took snake food and drinks with them.4.success will come after you work hard.
3..they took snake (for) food and drinks with them
But flesh with the life-blood in it you may not take for food.
惟独肉带着血，那就是它的生命，你们不可吃。
And a voice came to him, saying, Come, Peter; take them for food.
又有声音向他说、彼得、起来、宰了吃。
4.success will come if/when / till /as you work hard
问题补充：
是改错，自己写的不知有什么问题，我是初二的学生，谢谢你们！
最开始我最先答的时候，你并没有补充，第二句不知道你想要表达什么。
.He was going to have a party on the next day.
如果是这个意思：他打算要在第二天举办一个晚会
这么说就行：He was going to hold a party the next day
不用on 如果想要强调， 加ON也是可以的，但不知道你想要表达的汉语意思。
1.He went to(THE/A 名词前面通常要有冠词等,TO后面不能直接就加名词) supermaket to buy some foods.
2.He was going to have a party on the next day.
这句话没问题.

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1他去超级市场买一些食物
2第二天他要办一个派对

1. food 就行，没有foods一说。food大多时候是不可数名词
2.想表示“举行party”吗，最好用“hold a party”

上楼说的对

你是要翻译还是改错呀？如果是改错的话，第二句话中on 应该去掉，而且第一句中的supermarket前应该有冠词吧！

改为：
1. He went to the supermarket to buy some food.
2. He was going to a party the next day.