大家帮忙看一下这篇文章有没有语法错误Helen Keller The most importand day that Helen remembered in all her life was the one on which her teacher came to her and taught her to spell a great many words.And what she did was simple imit

大家帮忙看一下这篇文章有没有语法错误Helen Keller The most importand day that Helen remembered in all her life was the one on which her teacher came to her and taught her to spell a great many words.And what she did was simple imit
大家帮忙看一下这篇文章有没有语法错误
Helen Keller
The most importand day that Helen remembered in all her life was the one on which her teacher came to her and taught her to spell a great many words.And what she did was simple imitation.In this days she learned to spell many words like cup,hat and other words.
Words that were to make the world bright for her,and she was living a new life.She learned a language and was keen to use it.
Everyone has eyes to see and ears to hear,but Helen could not learn quickly,because she was blind and deaf.She used all the other skills and became the world's most famous teacher of the blind and deaf.
这个是我从一篇课文《Helen Keller》中写的一篇复述，明天星期三要考试用的。

大家帮忙看一下这篇文章有没有语法错误Helen Keller The most importand day that Helen remembered in all her life was the one on which her teacher came to her and taught her to spell a great many words.And what she did was simple imit
importand---important 拼写有错
后面一句的her可以省略
In this days this ---those or these
other words ----so on

太多英语字母了,刚刚高考完,不想看见英语字母,痛苦啊TAT~~~~
咱就看了1.teach sb sth不加(TO)
2.and what she did was simply(不是simple)
3.说实话,最后一句表达不清....
给你提个建议,写文章尽量不要用定从啊什么什么复杂句势,越简单越好.老师们文章改错是按照错了多少(语法...

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太多英语字母了,刚刚高考完,不想看见英语字母,痛苦啊TAT~~~~
咱就看了1.teach sb sth不加(TO)
2.and what she did was simply(不是simple)
3.说实话,最后一句表达不清....
给你提个建议,写文章尽量不要用定从啊什么什么复杂句势,越简单越好.老师们文章改错是按照错了多少(语法和单词)来改的,所以越复杂的句势越容易出错.就简单的文章浅显易懂,条理又很容易看出来,反而容易得高分.
没有骗你哦,小四今年高考英语单科成绩140分.

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基本上是通畅的，
most important 可能是打错了
was the one (on) which 应是 was the one (in) which
which 这里就是 that one day,
this days 不对 those days
teacher of the blinds and deafs