短文改错 很急xiaohua's father bought her the new bike the day before yesterday,which itxiaohua's father bought her the new bike the day before yesterday,which it made her very excited .so she rode it fast on the road .seeing a man get lose to h

短文改错 很急xiaohua's father bought her the new bike the day before yesterday,which itxiaohua's father bought her the new bike the day before yesterday,which it made her very excited .so she rode it fast on the road .seeing a man get lose to h
短文改错 很急xiaohua's father bought her the new bike the day before yesterday,which it
xiaohua's father bought her the new bike the day before yesterday,which it made her very excited .so she rode it fast on the road .seeing a man get lose to her .xiaohua couldn't stop it and as a result ,she knocked onto the man.being very kind ,the man didn't scold her at all .instead,he told her how dangerously it was to ride a bike so fast .he asked her keep the lesson in mind .xiaohua felt regretful but ashamed .she promised to keep the lesson in mind for ever ,

短文改错 很急xiaohua's father bought her the new bike the day before yesterday,which itxiaohua's father bought her the new bike the day before yesterday,which it made her very excited .so she rode it fast on the road .seeing a man get lose to h
xiaohua's father bought her the（改为a） new bike the day before yesterday,which it（it删去） made her very excited . so she rode it fast on the road . seeing a man get（改为getting） close to her .xiaohua couldn't stop it and as a result ,she knocked onto（改为into） the man. being very kind ,the man didn't scold her at all .instead,he told her how dangerously（改为dangerous） it was to ride a bike so fast . he asked her keep（keep前面加一个to） the lesson in mind . xiaohua felt regretful but（but改为and） ashamed . she promised to keep the lesson in mind for ever ,

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Xiaohua's father bought her a new bike the day before yesterday, which made her very excited. Then Xiaohua rode the bike fast on the road. Suddenly, Xiaohua saw a man get lose to her, but she couldn't...

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Xiaohua's father bought her a new bike the day before yesterday, which made her very excited. Then Xiaohua rode the bike fast on the road. Suddenly, Xiaohua saw a man get lose to her, but she couldn't stop. As a result, she knocked onto the man. However, the man was so kind that he didn't scold her at all. Instead,he told her how dangerous it was to ride a bike so fast, which Xiaohua should keep in mind. Feeling sorry and ashamed, Xiaohua promised not to do that any more.

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xiaohua's father bought her a new bike the day before yesterday,which made her very excited . so she rode it fast on the road . seeing a man get lose to her .xiaohua couldn't stop it and as a result ,...

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xiaohua's father bought her a new bike the day before yesterday,which made her very excited . so she rode it fast on the road . seeing a man get lose to her .xiaohua couldn't stop it and as a result ,she knocked into the man. being very kind ,the man didn't scold her at all .instead,he told her how dangerous it was to ride a bike so fast . he asked her to keep the lesson in mind . xiaohua felt regretful and ashamed . she promised to keep the lesson in mind for ever 。
改错题嘛 不要修改太多，从基本的语法，即时态，语态，主谓一致，冠词使用，前后承接，介词搭配是否得当，固定搭配的英法，词性的使用这些方面入手，回答起来就容易多了。
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