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短文改错 Dear Kate,1.l'm very excited learn that you短文改错Dear Kate,1.l'm very excited learn that you are coming to 2.my city for your summer vacation.Both of my parent 3.miss you a lot.So did my sister,Cathy.June is the best 4.time of the
短文改错 Dear Kate,1.l'm very excited learn that you
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Dear Kate,
1.l'm very excited learn that you are coming to
2.my city for your summer vacation.Both of my parent
3.miss you a lot.So did my sister,Cathy.June is the best
4.time of the year to visit the city,because of there is only
5.a few rain and it is not hot in June.There are
6.many attractions that worth visiting.You'll be
7.deep impressed by them.We hope that you can stay
8.with ourselves while you are here.My house is in the
9.centre of the city,from that you can easily go everywhere
10.by bus.I'm surely you'll enjoy your vacation here.

短文改错 Dear Kate,1.l'm very excited learn that you短文改错Dear Kate,1.l'm very excited learn that you are coming to 2.my city for your summer vacation.Both of my parent 3.miss you a lot.So did my sister,Cathy.June is the best 4.time of the
Dear Kate,1.l'm very excited 【加上 to】learn that you are coming to 2.my city for your summer vacation.Both of my 【parent 改成parents】3.miss you a lot.So 【did 改成 does】 my sister,Cathy.June is the best 4.time of the year to visit the city,because 【去掉 of】 there is only 5.a 【few 改成 little】 rain and it is not hot in June.There are 6.many attractions that worth 【visiting 改成 visits】.You'll be 7.【deep 改成 deeply】 impressed by them.We hope that you can stay 8.with 【ourselves 改成 us】while you are here.My house is in the 9.centre of the city,from 【that 改成 which】 you can easily go everywhere 10.by bus.I'm 【surely改成 sure】 you'll enjoy your vacation here.
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parent...parents
did....does
that后加is
deep...deeply
ourselves...us
surely....sure